Ollie & Dot
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CALL PICK

Voice Call Favorites

Selected during client call + P5 review
Spread 1 — Cover
"The blue, the dark blue" — client's favorite. P5: "looking pretty good, just need 1:1 ratio."
CALL PICK Cover P3 V2 P3 V2 — BEST
CALL PICK Cover P3 V1 P3 V1
CALL PICK Cover P4 Ref V3 P4 Ref V3
Spread 4 — Sunny Reef
THE WINNER. "This one nails it." Only change: Ollie looking straight forward.
CALL PICK Sunny Reef V2 V2 — THE WINNER
Spread 5 — Hide & Seek
P5: liked composition of V1. Need mixed media collage style applied.
CALL PICK Hide & Seek P5 V1 P5 NB2 V1 — composition
Spread 6 — Edge / Drop-off
P5: pipe_s06_nbp_v5 favorited. Edit this scene, don't regenerate. Add collage cliff edge + photo-realistic ocean surface.
CALL PICK Edge NBP V5 NBP V5 — to edit
Spread 7 — Down They Swam
V1: "I could stare at it" — client's favorite. V7: "most dark blue." V5: "already deeper, don't see surface."
CALL PICK Down They Swam P1 NBP V1 P1 NBP V1 — FAVORITE
CALL PICK Down They Swam P3 V7 P3 V7 — dark blue
CALL PICK Down They Swam P3 V5 P3 V5 — deeper feel
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